Once she got in... the screen should have been place on the television... the last thing we see happens to be her banging on the screen, or the scenery changed and becomes populated with a metropolis rendering her incapable of finding her entrance/exit point... decent concept, but the follow through is where it fails... Great job though.
and it destroys everything, which is why I want in. my little eyes are always looking for a way to harm.
returnoftheramble 3 months ago
Then Why Show It On TV
SnappyPenguin566 10 months ago
Once she got in... the screen should have been place on the television... the last thing we see happens to be her banging on the screen, or the scenery changed and becomes populated with a metropolis rendering her incapable of finding her entrance/exit point... decent concept, but the follow through is where it fails... Great job though.
Melanatedone 2 years ago