Hurling Crowbirds at Mockingbars (Cover) By Buddy Wakefield

Another Cover of one of Buddy's pieces.

If you could, comment with criticism and like. It's greatly appreciated.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Buddy
• Wakefield
• Huring
• Crowbirds
• at
• mockingbars
• cover
• spoken
• word
• poetry
• banjo
• bette
• laurel
• opening
• tina turner

[keepledeepler123]

You're talented, even if this isn't your work.

[remember132]

@keepledeepler123 Thanks man, that means a lot.

[Shana4]

your interpretation is beautiful. :)

[remember132]

@Shana4 (:

[Zeke011]

There are lots of places where you don't have any feeling for the words or the images, you are clearly faking it. Don't get me wrong, there are moments that are just "wow." Yeah, now that I have finished the video, you need caesura's my friend. And, you need to stop butchering the words of the poem. I know I am very criticism heavy, but, in all honesty, I thought you had a rather good interpretation. But if that is all I tell you, then you won't improve, at all. Good work.

[Zeke011]

Bro, I'm like 45 seconds in, and I can already tell that you need to know where to pause. Or, rather, you need to pause at all. Get all of your words correct, I mean that is just ridiculous. Every word was chosen for a reason, and each word is in it's place for a reason. Don't go into "your poetry voice", it sounds like you are trying to change the pitch of your voice so it sounds more like buddy, or more like "a real poet." Just use your normal voice, and put feeling into it.