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A Magic Mountain of a Journey

If you were to ask me, I would say That life is not one journey,but many journeys Made mostly in parallel. This poem is about one of my parallel journeys. I make no apologies for obscure referen...  
 
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keanghiero (1 month ago) Show Hide
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nice work.
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all the best
Kean
brychar66 (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Echoes of Blake as well as Eliot adding to the fascination of the not-quite-understood logic of the piece (art needs little logic). Title must be Mann and there's a Jewish undercurrent. But these rhymes Lina are just up my street and the lovely long rhythms. It has a witty melancholy but is razor-sharp - which I should think is you in a nutshell ;)
PoetLina (1 month ago) Show Hide
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More razor to the the melancholy with a bit of a whit of wit just about right.
Thank you for "seeing " so much, so pleased you enjoyed it. (How about throwing in a smattering of Bernard Shaw, or perhaps not so "done" these days? ;-) ).
dashpoet (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Sumptuously phrased, a journey to get lost in, as the best journeys always are. As TS Elliot inspires, do you.
PoetLina (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Thank you so much, Mark. Somehow I knew that you, in getting lost, would not get lost here. :-)
andrewnorris1 (2 months ago) Show Hide
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I agree with tinySpectacle's comments, the rhythm and subtle rhymes are truly wonderful, appearing unexpectedly yet create a momentum that leads us through a vast landscape, from the Steppes to Stepney, leading up to your denouement. And I shall never look at a Northern sea again without thinking of a Prussian's cloak. Truly a remarkable journey, physically, emotionally and spiritually. My new fav.
PoetLina (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Thank you fellow traveller. I have truly been surprised at how so many have found ways in to this poem, I should not have been given the insight of my friends on youtube. :-)
PoetLina (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Thank you so much for visiting and grappling with this one. It would take a tome of an autobiography to explain this poem away; that's largely why I love poetry.
I hope you get some sense of "sadness and longing", I suspect you did.
My best wishes to you and to Canada. :-)
PoetLina (2 months ago) Show Hide
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Your comments send a warming and a lifting; I know you know that feeling. :-)
PoetLina (2 months ago) Show Hide
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You mean you know some others?! ;)

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