Jathia's Wager is a science fiction movie about a young man living in an isolated community of humans, who must make a life changing decision about his future species.
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As a writer and a novel editor, I have always believed that good conflicts make good stories. This story has no antagonist, and thererfor no conflict.
When a story has no antagonist, or the antagonist is a pushover, and the conflict is provided through infighting among the protagonists, I call this disease of the story "McCaffery Syndrome," after a Fantasy Novelist with that name.
This has that problem.
No space to explain how to fix it. Out of characters remaining.
cpuwrite 1 year ago
Very creative, great quality too!
deannashm 1 year ago
Really cool story line, somehow seems kind of plausible making it engaging. Nice job!
J99Jamz 2 years ago