KING PETER'S WIFE, WARRIOR OF NARNIA... PLEASE COMMENT
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xena?????????????
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Haven't read the fic, but from the looks of the vid, I'd have to say your character seems to be a bit of a Mary Sue...
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Your fanfic sounds like something I might read. Great job. Hey check out mine if you would. You dont have to just wanna get mine out there. The trailer is up here on youtube. Just check out my videos its called the True Narnian Prophecy. Otherwise great great job!
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So did you write that yourself? It's very good and so tragic, but at the same time happy when they meet again*Applause*
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i read it and its good
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i felt really bad for aella. her mother being the white witch and all, but i had to say i could see that coming. i love that you didn't change the way peter acts. i have read a lot of versions of narnia and peter always is gets married or something like that, but they always change who peter really is. i love that you didn't change him. he is so sweet
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hey belive me i know but it was great
Peter doesn't ever get married.
008Serenity 1 year ago
@008Serenity ... yah i know its a FANFIC!
fantasyfreakXD 1 year ago
hey i read your story and thought it was great. i infact do have my own version of narnia. it dosn't iclude any romance in it and it isn't on the internet. but i just wanted to say that i enjoyed reading the story i've read it twice. but no offence it isn't as good as the original
peterfreak7 3 years ago
nothings as good as the original. ever. thats how fanfics go
fantasyfreakXD 3 years ago
Two words: MARY SUE.
Dearheart42 3 years ago
...?
fantasyfreakXD 3 years ago