The day you`ve forgotten me (acapella )

This is a Song i wrote lately and now made my very first selfmade video.^^ (a real challenge haha ) The Song is an acapella Version. The few persons i showed it like it so i thought i share it with you. Its about being disappointed by people you trustet in......

I hope you like it, Please leave comments :)


Lyrics:

Blind eyes , watching me.
Not the mirror i used to see,
tell me - how can it be?
The voice i hear , it cant be yours-
Once i trusted in.
Now i am freezing,
all right i ll give in.

You `ve forgotten me in wind and rain,
left me all alone,
freezing in my pain.
I had told you short before,
the way the walls break down,
while my soul rolls insecure-
trying to find a home.

Chorus: The day you`ve forgotten me-
i was afraid of it.
I knew it would come that far ,
will you regret ?
The day you`ve forgotten me ,
a whole world turned black,
and sometimes i ask myself-
will the light come back?

So we go our ways,
more and more seperated.
My love for you- it stays.
My trust in you just faded,
Once i believed in you,
and in all the things you said,
but you choose to overlook my sensibility instead.

Chorus: The day you`ve forgotten me ,
i was afraid of it,
I knew it would come that far,
will you regret ?
The day you`ve forgotten me,
a whole world turned black,
and sometimes i ask myself -
will the light come back?

I have to walk without a hand (to hold )
My pale shadow and me,
While everything is fading far
in the mirror of my dreams.
The world turned round ,
once again,
i am falling at its feet.
Please stop turning all that fast,
you see it makes me weak - so weak.

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[XXXxxxLillith]

Hi Bill !

dont worry it wasnt about you ;) But i am still glad to hear from you ^^

Thanks for your comment. I know you are right about holding th e note at the end, but i still liked it.

I wanted it to be pure:)

i am pretty good, how are you , whats going on ?

hug

[KristieLynn7209]

Nicely done.. good song :-)

[XXXxxxLillith]

@KristieLynn7209 Thank you :) Its just a melody with a text but i kind of liked it ^^

I am glad you like it as well, have a nice day ^_-

[rpbraziliansinger]

Hey Lillith! Amazing lyrics! Nice singing! I also liked the edition, good job! =)

[XXXxxxLillith]

@rpbraziliansinger Thank you :) Th edition made me craaazyyy :D I am happy you like it :)

[gassyoldman]

This is a very sad song, it felt like you were singing it to me, made me feel guilty. I am sorry it takes me forever to comment. I hadn't forgotten you.

You have a good strong distinctive voice. A little weak on holding a note to the end, but mostly in tune and good time keeping. Acapella is not the easiest to do.

Bill XXX PS.How are you?