The Red Ribbon

The story of a stalker who kills his victims with a red ribbon.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• stalker
• horror
• creepy
• suspense
• thriller
• student film
• dark
• film noir
• black and white
• pleasantville effect

[akaneo17]

wow! this is excellent considering ur position! that's really kool!

and ur welcome :)

[thorton2006]

This was the final project for a beginning film class. While I believe I progressed since the first project, I am by no means a serious filmmaker. It was also shot in 3 days with limited time, locations and equipment.

Thank you for the criticism though :) It is much apprieciated.

[akaneo17]

(contin.) also, the audio was really well cut, but i kinda think it could have been a lil smoother in transitioning between shots.

this is ur film though. so some of my suggestions might step on some things u did on purpose. i don't mean to offend at all.

i love how in every shot it looks like u didn't limit urself to ur surrounding. and having no dialogue... that's one of my favorite kind of techniques. playing on all the visuals. great job!

[akaneo17]

veeeeeery nice. i love the eerie feel to it.

i feel like the ending could of have some closer with the guy's girl that he got the ribbon from (correct me if i'm wrong).

tip: if ur trying to do a serious film, don't use auto settings on ur camera. it destroys the look of some shots.

[Darnack7]

Nice ending