enjoy, y'all
There are souls dying to rest
but all they need now is to wake
so I sing my morning song
unholy noise for the unblessed
There are nations bleeding souls
not unlike the one I've sung about
so I sing my morning song
chaotic noise for no control
Ours is a planet full of wars
among the nations from before
so I sing my morning song
violent noise, been shaking long
And I sing my morning song
while I'm trying to belong
to a class of artists living
in a world answering questions
teaching the wrong lessons
Mine is a soul dying to rest
mine is a nation bleeding souls
and I sing my morning song
a substitution for protest
Artists do what artists will
heaven knows they're people still
some of them sing a morning song
protesting noise is all some sing
And I sing my morning song
while I'm trying to belong
to a class of artists living
in a world answering questions
teaching the wrong lessons
Good progression..... Good hook in the chorus.... Got the message but try to thin down the verbage and the amount of syllables to be more direct with your audience..... Good voice.... Do more!
deanrasik 2 years ago