haha, this was great :) It made me laugh where it was meant to, the vocals were solid, I also liked the great variation in strumming patterns with the different parts of the song! Definitely agree with brenns on the "poppy" part. Sounds good, keep it up :)
good song! It has verses, a chorus, and a bridge. there's comedic bits in all the sappy goodness. the guitar sounds great. I like the little "poppy" bit around 2:20.
I really like your song! :) you are doing it greate! :)
ThisIsntTheNickIWant 1 year ago
haha, this was great :) It made me laugh where it was meant to, the vocals were solid, I also liked the great variation in strumming patterns with the different parts of the song! Definitely agree with brenns on the "poppy" part. Sounds good, keep it up :)
RandomLlama380 2 years ago
good song! It has verses, a chorus, and a bridge. there's comedic bits in all the sappy goodness. the guitar sounds great. I like the little "poppy" bit around 2:20.
Keep writing!
SnowWhiteOfSD 2 years ago