Lyrics - The Gates (of hell) -
(C) 2009 - Played by Metallates
Written by me - Please comment for approval
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The Gates of hell
Razor sharp claws
dig through the flesh
climbing it's way to the top
Feathers from wings
torn off long ago
dance upon the wind
Slashing through bodies
and bones just the same
blood trickles down the pile
The screaming never ends
tears are always flowing
to nowhere
Fire and ashes
fall from the sky
burning all around
A body tossed aside
to fall for eternity
into the darkest pit
Rivers of blood
and mountains of bodies
The gates of hell
Hey man thanks for sending me the message of your song!
Well i think that the refrain is good but you have to modify the main riff of this song because it doesn't reflect the thoughts of dante's inferno ^_^
However it's just my opinion and, above all, keep it up, it's a good studio record!!
BlueOmegaRanger 2 years ago
Amazing video and excellent original song !
Awewsome job !
The fantastic sound !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
My approval 100% and 5 stars!
un testo csì sì ke smuove i neuroni!
msabsolutebeginner 2 years ago
My approval 100% and 5 stars!
un testo csì smuove i neuroni;)))
msabsolutebeginner 2 years ago
Hi Man! Thanks for sending me the message of your song!
Well, i think that it's a good song, but maybe it doesn't reflects the thoughts of dante's inferno...
According to me the refrain is good but it's the main riff that you have to change... However, it's just my opinion so... keep it up!! ^_^
BlueOmegaRanger 2 years ago
great job!!!
i love it:)
msabsolutebeginner 2 years ago
Cool tune :)
Video is different but that what makes it unique and that's why I give it 5*****
Nicely done!
Indy
1975Pontiac 2 years ago
Nice music, my friend! :))
FreeSilio 2 years ago