Bittersweet Symphony Spit - Rap (Original)

sorry about the audio clipping, do me a favour and check out the asian guy in related videos (remix freeverse), he's playing like his verses destroooy mine, but i think his blows, besides the ovulating rhyme. let me know

Lyrics:
I feel like nothin but small, I put my head to the wall
I try to run em over but they kick my knees and I fall
My stride turns to a crawl, I clench my fist to a ball
Middle finger to the law, Im sick of being in thrall
Feel like I owe it to yall, I feel like nothin but tall
I keep goin and flowin, knowin that no ones gon top
I keep growin and showin everyone that Im glowin
Stayin high like a boeing, lyrics is bones that im throwin
Feel like I wanna just dive in, forget stickin my toe in
Feel like I wanna keep strivin, no way this kid is plateauing

I filled that hole inside me, no longer feel like a donut
Nichole isnt beside me, it sure feel like it dont it
I gotta live for the moment, not for some day of atonement
Reveal my skill and just hone it, grab the mic and just own it
Destroy every opponent, Never down will I tone it
Its like a light that just shone in, never before had I shown it
Im sick of all of your groanin, all youre bitchin and moanin
Im a man, Im grown, Id rather walk it alone
So stop being controlling, looks like the eagle has flown in
Ill no longer be prone and Ill just sit on my throne and

Become a lyrical poet, although you never would know it
Seamlessly weave it and flow it, didnt think a white kid could sew it
Ill sink your ship in the ocean, make you drop down below it
Ill take a toke and just blow it, while I just steer it and row it
Ill be sippin on moet, my grass greener, I mow it
I see you trippin I know it, in 30 minutes I wrote it

If you havent noticed its on, Im not the king, Im the don
This is a wake up song, thats right Im king of the dawn
So put your makeup on, go hit the salon
Youre all bark no brawn, so listen bitch be gone
Im like a beautiful spawn, a white dove or a swan
Your tracks make me yawn, you aint a rook, youre a pawn
Uh oh ring the alarm, your rhymes are petty like tom
This aint a rap or a song; this is a miracle psalm
No theres no gun in my palm, only a lyrical bomb
No need for that, I slay the ladies with empirical charm

Listen to the whoas, from all my friends and my foes
Wipe my mind clear of my woes, stick to my guns and my bros
Hope I start playin at shows, when I start playin it shows
From your head to your toes you vibe the rhymes I compose
when i bust my flow, i set it off on a roll, fo sho
then I adjust my lows inside of my homemade studio
and I just froze your toes with that last rhyme I exposed
it shows, when it rains it snows cuz im makin it rain like no wayne knows
keep off that blow, you shouldnt play with your nose
it blows, compared to the that takes us to higher plateaus

Im real, your phony, Ill eat you up like bologna
I guarantee someone will steal this rap, but whos the pro? me
Your so far below me, so blow hard and just blow me, slowly
Thank you verve and jay z for the beat youve bestowed me
Sounds like the beat is now fadin, I had a point and I made it
Thought up some rhyme so I laid it, found a sick beat so I played it
So on a note unrelated, this rap will surely get hated
I just hope you think that I kicked it better than they did

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[krunchbar10]

youve got a gudda guddaish vibe to your voice, but its not the exact same. nice job man! 10/10

[6stringedcanon]

@krunchbar10 good thing i curse like a sailor and smoke weed lol, thanks!

[ZomBoiMusic]

You got some skills but you needa not rhyme every word like that it makes ya flow weak but good usein the vocab though

[6stringedcanon]

@ZomBoiMusic, yeah yo i know i need to work on the flow and the delivery, its tough to nail it all in one take though right? im working on that, but you shouldn't discourage me from rhyming every word like that lol. read the lyrics back, those are ballistic!! you dont think so?? multisyllabic rhyming and 2 rhymes in line that are relevant to the whole verse man i think its awesome

[koreanmidget84]

@6stringedcanon this was sick!! i was all over this, damn. but i almost agree with what he's saying. i think u should definitely keep up the rhymes, but one thing i love about eminem so much is his ability to make words rhyme that don't in the first place. thatd be tight if you worked that in with ur lyrics. just some constructive criticism. take it or leave it =)

[6stringedcanon]

@koreanmidget84, taking it. everyone take note, this is how comments are made. i appreciate it, im 5'1, keep the brotherhood strong

[jecreations1]

Nice one man, lyrics are pretty impressive. Hope the last two years have been successful ones for you!

[Thatkidluke28]

Your good but don't be to cocky mate it wont get you no were take peoples criticism as something to work on and make your raps so they have nothing to discourage you about and they'll give you nothing but praise

[haraldinho13]

Wow, so many racists in comments! Dont see him as whitey, see him as a man a guy.

Dont talk about colours, this makes racism

[seventensix]

yeah so wat hes wite



[GetCinematics]

Wow man, fuck skin colour, thats awesome!

[Jxrred]

anybody notice he's white?! fuck!

[kukenjitsu]

Good job whitey.

[TheSportsBlogger]

Oh and also, those final verses were mint. And hey scrubs who say " he's white" yea. So is eminem, Mac miller, Chris Webby and Asher Roth. Oh and Sammy.

[TheSportsBlogger]

This is. so. amazing. Please please please don't give up and keep making songs. Please.

[Aggezon]

Nice! Keep goin' whitie