Sometimes

I'd love feedback, if you'd be so kind! Positive, negative...I know there are imperfections in the song, so it's all helpful. :)

LYRICS:

"Sometimes"
By Jordan Gillstrom


Verse 1:
Sometimes you find
Everything
That you were looking for
Right in front of you

Sometimes all it takes
Is to lose everything
That you were looking for
To open the door

Chorus:
Comatose fear of the night
Awake with the covers clutched tight
I'm deathly afraid of losing
What was never mine to own

Verse 2:
Sometimes you need
Everything
To ebb away before
You can touch the shore

Sometimes you dream
Of ocean waves
Crashing in your ear
But it's near, yes it's near!

Category:

Music

Tags:

• HopeRising Project
• Astlarya
• Song
• Patience
• Faith
• Hope
• Fear
• Surrender
• Sometimes

[Astlarya]

Thanks!

[iamolivia1020]

Wow! You have an amazing voice. You wrote this yourself? Pure talent :)