a lit bit too much flittering vibrato. i am currently perfecting this song. the flitter is a nice touch to a beautiful light song but don't use it too often or it becomes rather annoying. and some of the notes are off and the rhythm is off on the vocal part. if this is an interpretation of the song then it's alright. don't scoop on "swans down.." it ruins your lovely voice. also you might want to add an h in front of white so that white is more articulate.
lovely song thanks for sharing!
herincsdani 2 years ago
a lit bit too much flittering vibrato. i am currently perfecting this song. the flitter is a nice touch to a beautiful light song but don't use it too often or it becomes rather annoying. and some of the notes are off and the rhythm is off on the vocal part. if this is an interpretation of the song then it's alright. don't scoop on "swans down.." it ruins your lovely voice. also you might want to add an h in front of white so that white is more articulate.
operadiva14 2 years ago
Very good, but work on the recording system so that your voice stands out a bit more agains the accompaniment and white noise.
Ulthgar 3 years ago
thia is a nice song... the voice is very lovely indeed...
SMariesong611 3 years ago
I think the voice is quite lovely! I have a rather obsessive love for this simple song. So light and beautiful.
Shifterred 3 years ago