off the top of the mind

a free style poem

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[TheSpencer1960]

newcomposition, Did not mean to rattle you in any way. I was trying to give you a compliment! I think pot should be legal, I like pot smokers, so I meant nothing negative about calling you a pothead, so sorry if you took that way! You have a beatnik vibe in your poetry, which is was cool. You are very talented young man!

[newcomposition]

@TheSpencer1960 sorry i didn't mean to make my words harsh. i didn't take offence. my mind build apon what it experences and gathers. in all spirit we should learn to look and move forward and lead by example. creative intanty or soul, political or otherwise.... blah blah blah. in essence there is now a disconnect, brought on by language and the load they carry all of it is just simanitacs and the values we attribuite these words. it's the difference in simple calling the kettle black or....

[newcomposition]

@TheSpencer1960 .... we could evolve past the need to have to focus on the trivial... words are stupid. but you have respect them first... like the moment we realize that our parents are not gods... they are mortal and imperfect... and we if we let ourselve gasp finially our own mortality. and just like that... a few years... a thing that was once all encompassing is in all actually just stupid words...

[newcomposition]

(last one) @TheSpencer1960 i'm not ratttled sir. we are only what we manifest... though one day we may have to own up to society's labels and connotations, and misguided perceptions. one day they might not remember me. because they saw me as a pothead, that because we have forgotten how to value the Da Vinci of their time... or something.... blah blah blah

[TheSpencer1960]

Please do not cut off your ear! You are an Artist, and I assume a bit of a pothead(no prolem with that) You will find love again!

[newcomposition]

@TheSpencer1960 this hair style that my girlfriend is digging keep my ears looking proportion. if they didn't and i got anymore insecure you know those ears would be introuble. i'm glad my passions let me carry the titles of an artist. and i would have to tell you that pothead is a pretty strong word and has negative connotations. i guess we can play it by ear and see if the shoe fits.

[TheSpencer1960]

newcomposition, Did not mean to rattle you in any way. I was trying to give you a compliment! I think pot should be legal, I like pot smokers, so I meant nothing negative about calling you a pothead, so sorry if you took that way! You have a beatnik vibe in your poetry, which is was cool. You are very talented young man! 

[newcomposition]

@CelphaFiael blah... my writing recently has gotten so complex that it's almost easier for me to exhale poetic expression letting it bubble up using rhyme and word association... i'll give you a poem... but ya'll might have to read it to digest it... but what have you

[janeczka]

I love your freestyles. Love the rawness, the flow... well done, mate.

[alexhallgren]

its good to hear that voice again