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Uploaded by on Apr 12, 2008

Just a song I've been working on...is it just me or is the chorus not a very strong... it needs a bit of work...I wanted to share it incase someone has some suggestions on how to make it a little better. Any suggestions welcome :-)

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  • Really nice. I think you should find a local venue that plays live music and let the locals hear your music. I think it would be great to actually get peoples reactions to your music in person. Also you could network yourself and meat some like minded people. Keep up the good work. :)

  • Thats what I'm trying to do now...ind a regular place to play...hopefully soon I'll ind one. Thanks for checking this out...I'll be posteing up my EP version with a short time...so stay tuned!! :-)

  • this is a true song. did you finish it and didn't you post the lyrics anywhere? (can't catch it all)

  • I'll post the lyrics with the ep version. Tahnks so much for listening...I appreciate the support of my original music! :-)

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  • I confess I never liked this piece but seems slowly I come to understand and to appreciate it in a away. we can never have enough peace and calmness inside to understand things in a relaxed way and just lettin them go...

  • Great song !!! the groove is in the pocket , strong melody , I would'nt change anything !!!!

  • I will...just for you my friend !!! :o)

  • never mind, no it's admirable how many time you spend on replies... and very highly appreciated!! i hope you will keep this version though, as an interesting insight in WIP... :)

  • Gosh seems I am slack with my replies...how come I missed this...I'm very sorry fwb!!!! Tanks for listening....I will have to post the EP version.

  • geee, that sounds quite furious ;). pity you didn't post the lyrics anywhere here, as far as my blind eyes can see - will you? I dont know if comments are overdue since you released that already.. the chord at 2.22 sounds a bit strange, like a bossa nova, instead of subdominant one would exspect. but sometimes breaking the rules leads to new horizons... gee, I hide my head under a counterpane - but it is great anyway ;o)

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