Dramatic Monologue- "Pay Attention"
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it didnt flow together and your acting was a little off it just didnt seem like you were into the character
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From what I saw i felt that you were not 'in' the character it was kinda reading the monologue. I am saying this because when I read the monologue I also dont transmit the emotion clearly. With practice it will get better. I wish you Luck
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You should use beats in your monologue. You know like dramatic pauses.
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It is good, your expressions are really clear and they tell the story.
Pay more attention to the natural pauses in the mono, remember she IS talking to someone, so give him a chance to reply. Also with a mono that has a powerful beginning, you need to maintain the energy throughout the piece. You don't have a climax and the strength of your vocals decreased as the mono progressed.
Oh one last thing, don't throw the last line away! The last line can literally make a break a performance.
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wow, thank you so much, these were some of the most helpful comments i've ever had on youtube! I will definitely heed your advice, you are clearly a seasoned actor and know what your talking about. Also, it's funny you should mention about me throwing the last line away, i've had several of my friends tell me the same thing. I shall have to watch that more carefully! Anyway thanks again and thanks for watching!
elvishgal2 2 years ago