original lack of communication - poetry

poetry transpires: thinking the necessary thoughts
to means that make us complete
defeats the purpose of chance infusing it's dance
creating discovery of quests
remembering relationships left long last behind
the signs of the time unwind round the loop
until we're here back again delivering messes to you
regardless of age, what's left on the page is created by it's own means
only to be erased and replaced
face it
we're only here forever
and that is not enough time
since time is only a construct of the mind
then that makes us clever,
but we've evaded responsibility for enough of that nonsense
now together, we can do better
accomplish more than opening doors
and seize the power within our poor
liberated and haunted we fall into slumber
to wake when we want to evade our creations even longer
what I am doing here is not so clear
because everything is inverted outside of the mirror

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[lucasvf]

dude i have no idea what ur poem is about , but im really curious so if u have time, drop by my page and clarify it for me :D

[zackwolk]

plaguing yourself with social conventions such as social status, being worried about your age, race, gender. It's time to take consideration for our real ability to break through that barrier and enable ourself to see our true potential, not to depend on what the rest of the world thinks we're capable of.

[cwcfoundation]

Loved it. Keep it up, do lots more. We need this. Expand. I'll look for more from you.

[kooleodude770]

beutiful

[taslinTV]

Wow! Bravo! It is only on very rare occasions that I come across poetry that my entire being relates to....mind, body, heart, soul....Thank you for sharing this work of art from the new world ^_^

After reading this I think you may enjoy one or two of my poems as well.

Sending out golden love and light vibrations

Taslin (-*-)

[easternboarder00]

sounds like vivek has rubbed off on you..kook

[bbrizzy89]

hey nice stuff. Check out my slam about my high school experience it might be up ur ally.

[jackdebook]

where is vivek

[ArchieAA]

lol is that a bunk bed? I dont get you one second your trying to be Tom Green and failing horribly now your trying to be Ian Crossland and somehow your fucking that up too, If your going to pick somebody to emulate may I suggest picking somebody worthy and sticking with it, cause if your going to be a poser you might as well be a convincing one.

[scottzenegger]

very groovy.