Paradise [Def Poetry Spoken Word]

Paradise
[You Lose Me]

You lose me, Yea...... you lose me,
Cause a beauty like yours upon a face like yours, I just adore!
For sure, never have I seen somethin' like you before,
Like seas within your eyes, Cause how steep is your body...... to the shore of my brain, being washed away...... because you lose me......
You touch me...... and I tingle,
I smell you...... and I quench!
Like dehydration from your lips, Thrist for single kisses that I can't resist......
But I crave them!
Like the cool in that water...... in the hottest day of summer,
Pourin' chills down my back, like its July in December!
You talk...... and I hear you,
The signficant sounds of a melody, Tunes like nothing...... to dance to but make love to......
Metaphorically soft...... and I squeeze you,
I hum you...... and I drift!......
To places I've never been but swore I've been, Like a past life that just now happened,
Like...... what do you call it?......
Like deja vu whenever I'm with you,
Like all I wanna' do...... is be with you!
Wrapped up into the swag of you...... your persona, The sweetness that follows,
Comically in the middle, So contagious...... I cling!
Like sprung...... to where I believe everything that you tell me,
"Poppa', tell me that I am a bird...... tell me that I am bird...... tell me!"
And to the highest moutain will I strive to climb...... will I then jump to fly,
Flying my way into finding paradise...... because that is where I am lost......
Because you lose, Yea...... you lose me!

J. Weaver

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Entertainment

Tags:

• def
• poetry
• spoken
• word

[Lat3100]

Chills

[p8anut]

@Lat3100

Thank U!

[LadyWarriorofGod]

Very Nice! Spoken word can never be judge for it is authentic freedom of expression personalized from the soul that cries melodies from the depth of one's existence. It neither good or bad, right or wrong. It Just Is~ Keep the poetic flow in motion!!! One Love~

[p8anut]

@LadyWarriorofGod

Hey Miss lady! Thank U ooooh so much for that! I really do appreciate it! I'm so glad that U feel me & were able to feel it in this poem!

[ShannR414]

U r very easy to look at and ur voice is unique. Nice writting.

[p8anut]

@ShannR414

Thanks girl!

[PinkJuicee01]

My favorite!!! I heard a few of your others like the one to your mother and one other but i forgot the title but this one is my favorite! I tried to write before but I just dont have the talent. 

[krazy1luv]

You express your feelings in way we viewers feel but can't express it vocally like you. I dig it. 2 thums up

[AncientUniversal1]

Amazing p8anut. Your voice is so fluid. Your words are like hands made of silk that beat softly on my eardrums.

[lazsanchez31]

dame ur good, by far one of the greatest poems i heard so far, keep doing ur thing

[smurfsgot1]

i'm diggin this piece,bravo