Spyke's Poetry corner
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Benny2Rats is very good too.!
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Personally, I think you have great potential to become a very good poet. Your pen is laced with someone who seems older than your few years. This is the 1st. time I ever read anything by you, but it connected with a seasoned writer. Keep up the good work!
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That was sooooo good! good job! =)
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Draft#2 (spot the improvements & corrections) .. Thou art a poet I've seen thee show it You have the looks To sell many books And here's my point: You need a venture joint For a successful adventure I propose a joint venture We write in partnership (Now don't give me lip!) Your youthful energy and face And old me will put us ahead in the race
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thats good its clever too
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Thou art a poet I've seen thee show it You have the looks For high sales of books Here's my point: You need a venture joint For a successful adventure I propose a joint venture We write in in partnership (Now don't give me lip!) Your youthful energy and face And old me will put us ahead in the race
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Haha you've got the poets out in everyone. Shame I like to rhyme cunt with blunt and shit with fit otherwise I'd have a go
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=] It's nice...
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I have felt the evil that I dare not mention far beyond our comprehension The darkest night devoid of any golden light Where demons call and through there clouds beauty will fall I always close my eyes and hope that paradise my rise and that my dreams will close the demons eyes
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I dont understand why people are posting their poems on here..
...is it just me confused?
ANYWAYS,
I love how you read the poems.
You read it in a ryhthm and so dramatized.
I love it.
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im glad you like it hun
Spykopathic 3 years ago