Creepover

Made this for video, don't like it this is why:

Why this movie is bad in general:

* Comedy, but the jokes are too "concentrated" - they need to be spaced out through the whole movie evenly
* Needs more color filters on all shots
* Shots, in general, are held too long
* Audio dies sometimes
* Transitions between some scenes (like the "calling the fuzz" to gym scene) awful and random

Why this movie is bad, specifically

* Same "woosh" sound effect everywhere
* Title is too short and is boring.
* Splitscreen needs work
* Bad lighting on shots outside
* Obvious nightvision shots
* I knock the tripod when I'm being creepy outside the first time
* Obvious digital zoom in videogame scene
* The whole "number three" shot is awful for all reasons
* Peeing sound a little too loud
* When I'm creepy while he's peeing, the silence is unwanted and bad
* When they were playing video games, they got incredibly distracted and missed lines
* People are laughing if you look carefully
* Gym was bad because it was completely unscripted
* Ether store - should have shown less black frmo the fridge, and there was an audio error between "isn't that milk" and "no that'd be stupid"
* Drinking milk shot held too long and far, hard to tell I was drinking
* Worst passing out ever
* Hard to see my face on the album (which, BTW is real)
* Hard to tell I was allergic to dogs, in the movie
* You can hear the swear at the end

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• wtb
• wheresthebrain
• creep
• over
• creepover
• creepy
• sleep
• cow
• manure

[WhatDoUThinkOfThat]

I liked your description. I critique my videos the same way; however, I keep it to myself so that people don't get distracted and then they feel free to laugh and laugh until they pee. Maybe you should write the things that you do like about your videos, because they are good.

[wheresthebrain]

I hope they are, I just especially didn't like this one.

[duden12345]

wtb this video is awesome... your crazy...

-light boy

[wheresthebrain]

dammit lightboy.

[duden12345]

sun chips ???

[wheresthebrain]

NO, Lightboy!!! The chips are for the TALENT!!

[liz12341234]

u guys are funny

[sungalstudios]

allergic to dogs? that's not funny1 i'm highly allergic to dogs! i get sniffly and my nose gets really runny so don't do that it offens me and others!

[FourteenInTheMAking]

The longest entertaining waist of time of my life yet. HAHA, years to come now!

[SaintsRow312]

i like it

[WhatDoUThinkOfThat]

Then you must delete it and give yourself ten lashes.

[Nocstaa]

I like at the end you can still hear him say Shit

[MCRGURL112]

dude i luv ur vids!!

[lawlbubbs]

LMFAO i have to take a huge sh!t