I think you need something more touchy, like an electric guitar or something. The piano is great and soft, but if you get the electric guitar (or from a friend) and drums, they should be calm and a bit energetic after the slow tunes...Well, Im already writing songs, and Im only 13, so... yeah, you should put something energetic after the slow piano parts which would be the intro....Pretty good for a start, though.
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amirhiga 7 months ago
this was very good!
pettah93 9 months ago
I think you need something more touchy, like an electric guitar or something. The piano is great and soft, but if you get the electric guitar (or from a friend) and drums, they should be calm and a bit energetic after the slow tunes...Well, Im already writing songs, and Im only 13, so... yeah, you should put something energetic after the slow piano parts which would be the intro....Pretty good for a start, though.
TheWolfgangcuties 1 year ago
Trust me, no normal person cares about the lyrics - thats why new modern songs are so popular, you can't even understand half the lyrics :D
Dudeitookyourstash 1 year ago
Is this a joke? Instrumental part is good but put it to a good song. These lyrics just suck.
raidersj1121 1 year ago
give up on it...no one wants a song based on straight drugs....thats pathetic
captgjohnson 1 year ago
you suck very bad
Unknowndeficit 2 years ago
very good... i love it^^ ;)
bexteen007 2 years ago
good job!
bigkrisp 2 years ago
very good :-)
PabloDavi20 2 years ago