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Uploaded by on Mar 25, 2009

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  • comment i left a comment!!!

  • this was very good!

    

  • I think you need something more touchy, like an electric guitar or something. The piano is great and soft, but if you get the electric guitar (or from a friend) and drums, they should be calm and a bit energetic after the slow tunes...Well, Im already writing songs, and Im only 13, so... yeah, you should put something energetic after the slow piano parts which would be the intro....Pretty good for a start, though.

  • Trust me, no normal person cares about the lyrics - thats why new modern songs are so popular, you can't even understand half the lyrics :D

  • Is this a joke? Instrumental part is good but put it to a good song. These lyrics just suck.

  • give up on it...no one wants a song based on straight drugs....thats pathetic

  • you suck very bad

  • very good... i love it^^ ;)

  • good job!

  • very good :-)

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