Debt by Dante Basco
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It's as if this poem could pertain to college loans, too.
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You're awsome
lol never knew there's any kind of Rufio party, but it seems like fun
I distinctly remember you from Hook :P
It's cool that you're into poetry too
The delivery and poem itself is great
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can i have your couch??
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the hole that I stand in was passed down by my parents
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dude!!!! I LOVE YOU MAN!!! U LOOK SO COOL AS RUFIO!!!! U LOOK BETTER THAN HOOK LMAO!!!
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marry me. you give me goosebumps!
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Ha he could be like Dave Ramsey
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u must be so bored since avatar the last air bender ended. i know i am. btw, you and prince zuko are my favorite character. whenyou became good of course.pretty badass
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smart words... great poem!
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is it just me or does everything he say sound like a poem?
sil3ntsushi3 10 months ago 38
Quite an interesting poem. I like how you offer advice midway and how advice is in essence an exchange of information from one person to another which plays on the idea of debt. I now owe you for the advice you have bestowed upon me, however I feel as if the metaphor at hand is dropped. This in essence completes the thesis of the poem which is to get out of debt. I really appreciate the structure and narrative that your poem takes on and how challenging the lyricism ultimately becomes.
lKILLGIANTS 10 months ago 30