Brothers in Arms - (Halo Reach Machinima) Episode 6 - Nespaw
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@Thedeoradude Absolutly.
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@TransformersMan423 Well that's fine, i suppose i am a little overzealous, and i'm sorry if i came off the wrong way.
Still, if ever you want writing advice or some neat tools, just PM me, i'd be happy to help
cheers mate
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@Thedeoradude I understand, and i'm open to constructive critisism, but i just dont have those resources and the time to make it professional. What you see and hear is what you get.
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@Thedeoradude He actually says more but he said it really quiet, and I dont think he was in the mood to redo it.
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@Thedeoradude Halo Reach Soundtrack, Oni Sword Base, i think its the second or third track in the score.
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But all that said, on a lighter note, i like the music from the battle, where's that from?
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@TransformersMan423 also, this is bugging me more then it should, but narcissist is when someone thinks so much of themselves they're convinced that they're amazing and insist on things like putting their face on things or something of the like
Look mate, i just want to help, nothing against you, but i'm OCD and it's my mentality that, no matter what you're doing, and why you're doing it if you're not out doing your best and open to suggestion for improvement, you're just not doing it right
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@TransformersMan423 i'm offering help, i mean you're charicters aren't reflecting what they're seeing.
For example, when the pink guy rolls out in front of the others, he just says hello like he's bored, when he should be gloating or something of the like, mabye a bit stretched out and smarmy, not just short and meek.
and all i'm saying is, throw yourself into the charicters more, try to trigger what the charicter is thinking instead of just reading the script like a book offhandedly
I hate to say this but, I am starting to think that even aces acting is better the nespaws.
Fruitpumper2000 6 months ago
@Fruitpumper2000 seriously, Matt?
TransformersMan423 6 months ago