Without You - Original Song

Another song :)
As usual, I wrote it so it's copyrighted to me.

LYRICS
The wall bears your name
I scrawled it there so long ago
I cry out in shame
For feelings that you'll never know
And through the wind
I feel the wasted years
And in the rain
I waste a few more tears

Cries in the dark
I feel it in my heart
So confused
And nothing left to lose

Without you
I don't know what to do
Alone I dream
Of how my life could be
In the night
You're fading from sight
And oh it's true
I'm nothing without you

I know you don't care
But in your eyes I see a smile
A smile that's not there
But I will pretend for a while
That you are mine
And I am yours
And I could be
The one that you adore

I am alone
In a building made of stone
It's time to face the truth
There's nothing I can do

Without you
I don't know what to do
Alone I dream
Of how my life could be
In the night
You're fading from sight
And oh it's true
I'm nothing without you

I will wait
Here for you
There's nothing else
I can do
Show me something
I can feel
Take my dream
And make it real

Without you
I don't know what to do
Alone I dream
Of how my life could be
In the night
You're fading from sight
And oh it's true
I'm nothing without you

Category:

Music

Tags:

• rach
• macwhirter
• teen
• original
• song
• emo
• goth
• acoustic
• piano
• sparkly

[alnastra]

hihi! Yay for new songs! Still think "Pushing" is better lol, So epic! Uhm, love the high parts in the song <3 very pwetty with the piano. :)

P.S: Is it just me or is it always windy there?

xxAl

[RachMacwhirter]

It's windy a lot there. I was kinda hoping it'd start raining really hard XD

[SplinterCell37]

Fantastic job :)

[RachMacwhirter]

@daddyslittlgirl99

Why did I want it to rain? It would've been awesome for the atmosphere of the song :P

[MissAlwayslovingyou]

This is Beautiful!(: im very impresed with your voice. you are very talented!

[OZITOMAE]

wow

[Nicatroubadour]

But do you not feel that the arm gestures are an integeral part of the performance?

[OblivionRoseXx]

I think you did a good job on this song ^-^ Love it

[TheCriticallyHonest]

You really need to polish up that falsetto of yours darling. It takes away from an otherwise decent performance. Lose the overdramatic arm flapping too, it's a touch distracting.

[ShadowNinja987]

awesome song rach :D:D excellent job considering u were sick...those awesome melodies just keep coming and coming ^^