experimental film

Hi there.

I am working on a short film and would really appreciate feedback.

Its a work in progress and still requires compositing of 3d and 2d SFX but any tips of suggestions to improve it as it stands so far would be really appreciated.

Please take a few moment to rate the film (0 = poor 4= excellent)

Overall quality

Camera work

Audio

Lighting

Editing

Many, many thanks

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• short
• film
• experimental
• art

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Please take a few moment to rate the film (0 = poor 4= excellent)

Overall quality

Camera work

Audio

Lighting

Editing

Many, many thanks

[own3dstudios]

CW= 4. These shots really flowed nicely

Audio= 2. need some music for some parts. something to set the tone. also a little choppy in cuts.

L=3. good lighting in most of the house and such. maybe a tad more on the streets. otherwise exellent.

E=3 liked the effects. some minor fixes, maybe fasten it up a bit.

good job man, i like this.

[gronkadelic]

lol should read fast pace of shots^^^

OQ = 3

Incidently what camera you filming on?

[gronkadelic]

vell I liked it, nice shots n location... good use of darkness...will wait to see the crumbling n sfx...and the real audio but so far so good!

OQ =

CW = 4 good perspective of shots and clever angles

A = N/A needs the real soundtrack

L = 3 good use of natural lighting in locations, house maybe needs somert, either light it up to show transition or make it dark in a diff way to the "dvd" footage

E = 4 good cutting, face pace of shots, just needs a little tweaking here n there!Goodjob!

[InTheLunchBox]

personally i found it kinda of slow and it didn't get on with the idea you were trying to convey. It did have some excellent camera work though. The lighting could of been better inside of the house it was kind of dark the outside shots looked nice with the bluish color correction you did. Although the overall story I felt was severely lacking content.