@DeftaHelion I don't know enough about film to gauge the merit of your argument. I do know enough about people to tell you you're being a complete asshole to someone you don't even know and the only thing your excessively venomous, *anonymous* ad hominem attacks really say is that you're trying to fill some void in your life by looking down on random strangers on the internet. Grow the fuck up and find some healthier way to make yourself feel like a man, because this isn't helping you at all.
...and purely aesthetic. The fluff contained in your films is truely sickening at this point. I have not seen one competent piece of work from this channel.
Not a one. The ending was both flaccid and forced (something i didn't think was possible) and again, this displayed your complete and apparent inability to write a movie with any substance.
Josh, your movies are shit and your friends are blowing smoke up your ass.
But, the real world isn't gonna play those games when the time comes.
Next, the jokes are crudely placed and poorly timed. I know you like old games, but it is possible to leave them out of a video with a TV in it every now and again. Once that section ends, it's back to ineffective atmospheric tension. If you were to remove the music while you were deciding on the stairs, would it even vaguely resemble a horror situation?
Fuck no. You simply ride the audio the entire video and display very little writing ability. I also should mention all of the angles were weak
I don't believe you seriously go to film school and this is the best you can do.
This *film* has nearly no plot line. What was the point? I can tell that Josh the main character is basically fucking about in his dormitory slowly as generic (stolen) horror music plays. I see your foot tap, I see you play with your phone, and you ride an elevator. Something that takes 30 seconds took you 1:53. That's 5 times longer than necessary to show off pathetic, unnecessary exposition.
@DeftaHelion Brotip #619
There's a line between being blunt and just being an asshole
YAABUGGN 3 months ago
@DeftaHelion I don't know enough about film to gauge the merit of your argument. I do know enough about people to tell you you're being a complete asshole to someone you don't even know and the only thing your excessively venomous, *anonymous* ad hominem attacks really say is that you're trying to fill some void in your life by looking down on random strangers on the internet. Grow the fuck up and find some healthier way to make yourself feel like a man, because this isn't helping you at all.
ravendovev 3 months ago
...and purely aesthetic. The fluff contained in your films is truely sickening at this point. I have not seen one competent piece of work from this channel.
Not a one. The ending was both flaccid and forced (something i didn't think was possible) and again, this displayed your complete and apparent inability to write a movie with any substance.
Josh, your movies are shit and your friends are blowing smoke up your ass.
But, the real world isn't gonna play those games when the time comes.
DeftaHelion 3 months ago
Next, the jokes are crudely placed and poorly timed. I know you like old games, but it is possible to leave them out of a video with a TV in it every now and again. Once that section ends, it's back to ineffective atmospheric tension. If you were to remove the music while you were deciding on the stairs, would it even vaguely resemble a horror situation?
Fuck no. You simply ride the audio the entire video and display very little writing ability. I also should mention all of the angles were weak
DeftaHelion 3 months ago
I don't believe you seriously go to film school and this is the best you can do.
This *film* has nearly no plot line. What was the point? I can tell that Josh the main character is basically fucking about in his dormitory slowly as generic (stolen) horror music plays. I see your foot tap, I see you play with your phone, and you ride an elevator. Something that takes 30 seconds took you 1:53. That's 5 times longer than necessary to show off pathetic, unnecessary exposition.
DeftaHelion 3 months ago
I should have known that it'd be that dastardly boo again.
PhazonJuke 4 months ago
not bad
PeaceProducers 4 months ago