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yes! first original Japanese song uploaded in Youtube *A*!
please listen with headphones ~
I thank Aki for helping me and she wrote the lyrics for me too!~
she even made the vsq ;A;!~ thank you so much Aki!
and I thank NeutrinoP for exporting the tracks with GUMI Power's voice!
and Alice for the awesome art!! gimme your hands amg I love your art so much~!
okay thank you for listening guyss!
◆Nico link: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16360986
◆mp3: http://www.box.com/s/3sl6gdnf7gyh6d3nvne1 or http://www.4shared.com/audio/Zc3FtDag/Original_Poison__Divide_-_GUMI.html
◆off vocal: http://www.box.com/s/pdr3usj0lay4rtt133fg or http://www.4shared.com/audio/Eb9BrEVv/Off_Vocal_Poison__Divide.html
◆off vocal with harmonies: http://www.box.com/s/mnl5b22tx05aer73ubbf or http://www.4shared.com/audio/PZTD9-SG/Off_VocalHarmonies_Poison__Div.html
◆romaji and english lyrics: below
◆playlist of my original songs: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLACD1FAF292ED829B
*music: apol
*lyrics: EmpathP (AkiGlancy: http://www.youtube.com/user/AkiGlancy )
*Illustration: Alice ( http://whackthatalice.deviantart.com )
*video: apol
*Special thanks to NeutrinoP (Vocalekt Visions) for exporting GUMI's vocals: http://www.youtube.com/user/neutrino006
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LYRICS:
Poison & Divide
ROMAJI:
Gomen ne gomen ne
Arigatou kimi ni
Doushite doushite
Kotoba wa doku
atashi mo doku
Amai kaori mada nokoru
Mata onaji hanashi wo kikasareta
atashi no doryoku nanimo nara nakatta
ichinen sugu sugiru
Nannimo kawaranai
ichinen sugu sugiru
Sore wa mou itakunai
Gomen ne gomen ne
Arigatou kimi ni
Doushite doushite
Kotoba wa doku
atashi mo doku
Amai kaori mada nokoru
yaburareta yakusoku ni kodawaru
kimochi no seiri ga tsuke rare nakatta
ichinen sugu sugiru
Nannimo kawaranai
ichinen sugu sugiru
Sore wa mou itakunai
Gomen ne gomen ne
Arigatou kimi ni
Doushite doushite
Kotoba wa doku
atashi mo doku
Amai kaori mada nokoru
Soshite ima mo
Sayonara kimi ni
Kiete kiete
Nanimo nai
nanimo shinjinai
Aa, sou sore wa owari ne
Gomen ne gomen ne
Arigatou kimi ni
Doushite doushite
Kotoba wa doku
atashi mo doku
Amai kaori mada nokoru
Gomen ne gomen ne
Arigatou kimi ni
Tada sore dake
Demo, atashi wa wasurenai deshou
Itsumo kimi ga daisuki darou
ENGLISH:
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
And a "Thank you" to you
How come? How Come?
These Words are poison
I am poison too.
Yet the sweet smell remains
It's the same story I' ve heard many times before
My efforts were all for nothing
Now, after one year
Nothing changes
Now, after one year
It doesn't seem to matter anymore
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
And a "Thank you" to you
How come? How Come?
These Words are poison
I am poison too.
Yet the sweet smell remains
Clinging to the broken promise
I could not marshal my thoughts.
Now, after one year
Nothing changes
Now, after one year
It doesn't seem to matter anymore
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
And a "Thank you" to you
How come? How Come?
These Words are poison
I am poison too.
Yet the sweet smell remains
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
Goodbye to you
Disappear disappear
There is nothing anymore
And I believe in nothing
Oh, I see now This is the end
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
And a "Thank you" to you
How come? How Come?
These Words are poison
I am poison too.
Yet the sweet smell remains
I'm sorry, I'm sorry
And a "Thank you" to you
That's all there is
But, I won't forget
I will always love you
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Ok some tips on your composing...
its good, but whoever used Gumi for the voice... needs a lot of practice. its so skippy and choppy in a very robotic way. the effects are also amaturely used. next time, i suggest doing research on theory (composing basically) Also the song styling slightly resembles Deco*27 chorus range, but just a bit so its okay :) Also, the pitch you chose for Gumi to sing makes her sound flat (try a bit higher) It sounds really robotic overall too. hope you improve.
StrawberryVocaloid1 1 month ago
@StrawberryVocaloid1 ohh, thank you so much for your comment :)!
I don't have Gumi sooo, I asked Aki to make the vsq, I did some minor adjustments on the parameters ;w; so yeah,. I think the effects are just right, not much reverb and fine compression, but I think I should work with the equalization with Gumi's voice haha, but thanks for the comment, and I'll do my best to improve :D!!!
apolxcore 1 month ago 4
this sounds so so awesome~!! >w< can you tell me what video editing program did you use??? i just love it :3
DarkBlackAnonymous 2 months ago in playlist More videos from apolxcore
@DarkBlackAnonymous I used Sony Vegas xD!
apolxcore 2 months ago