Writing With Semicolons (1)
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If I get an A*, I will drive to Bichester to shake your hand.
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hi can you do more english video's please because i found this video easy to understand and really helpfull. thanks
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@bm124 YOU ACTUALLY REPLIED????!!! WOW, never seen the channel owner actually reply
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I have big penis; everyone likes it.
Sorry couldn't think of a clean example :D
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Your using lots of semicolons in your answers to comments; I find it interesting and humorous. << Was that right??
RobAnderson0 9 months ago
@RobAnderson0 Spot on; aren't you a clever little thing! Careful on your apostrophes/homophones though- that should be "you're" not "your" (see my colleague Miss Humphris video on this through my channel- will add it to the Top 5 Writing Skills playlist)
bm124 9 months ago
doesn't this mean that when you are describing something your paragraphs will be full of semicolons? "my house is big; I live there" "I love my house; it has a big TV in it" "my house is by the sea; there is a beach outside". when do we know not to use a semi colon?
geewizer33 9 months ago
@geewizer33 Simple- watch my video on varying sentence structure and then just mix it up a bit. Part of writing well is sustaining the interest of the reader; to do this, you have to demonstrate a bit of variety. See? Although I could use a semicolon in every sentence, I'm keeping it interesting by employing a variety of other structure too. Winner!
bm124 9 months ago
On your download sheet, for question one: People who like trains are very cool and they often have lots of friends.
Could you put - People who like trains; are very cool - they often have lots of friends? or instead of the hyphen a comma?
Thank you :) our teacher isn't very good at explaining but you make it sound so simple!
HannieeK 9 months ago
@HannieeK Glad to be of asisstance! That wouldn't really work as your semicolon is splicing the first clause. I'd go with either "People who like trains are very cool; they often have lots of friends." or "People who like trains are very cool- they often have lots of friends." I also wouldn't use a comma here at all. Hope that helps, good luck with exams.
bm124 9 months ago