Tränen der ein gemaltes Bild

The main theme used in the musical I am writing!

Its now finished but I have to get a violinist to record the piece.

Will post complete version soon!!!

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[MarryWitch94]

I absolutely adore this piece, but I wonder what you mean with the title. The German is far from correct. I don't speak good German myself, but I had it for about 4 years in school, so if you need help to correct it, I maybe able to help you out;)

[Thediegmyster]

@MarryWitch94 hey! :) thanks I am glad you like this song!! .. its has all the themes from the musical!!! i cant wait to get it finished!!

thanks for the offer :) but someone corrected it for me a while back

Tränen eines Kunstwerkes

i just forgot to change the tittle on youtube!! you very kind thank you! :)

Im glad you like this piece .. so far i think its my best work! :)

cant wait to hear what you create next!!! :D

[liliroquelin]

are you working on more new songs?

[Thediegmyster]

yes .. I'm working on a whole musical .. I wrote this song out as a piano piece which I will use later in the musical as a reprise of this orchestrated version... I cant wait to finish it!!

and I love your album I bought off Itunes! great work! :)

[tearsinraine]

whoa.. nice job man... awesome sound.. can't wait to hear it with the violin part...

[Thediegmyster]

Thanks man!!!!

I cant wait either!! I've gotta look for a violin player!! put some true feeling in there!!

the story is about the holocaust .. i need to actually sit down and write the story out .. but thanks for chekcing it out man!!!

did you do the EWQL 2009 competition?

[OrchestrationOnline]

About the only orchestration feedback I would have about this piece is that in long, simple string writing, it is sometimes good to have winds play parts contrary or contrasting to the strings, rather than doubling them. Or leave them out entirely - strings can carry a piece for a very long time before the rest of the orchestra joins in, especially for an adagio.

[OrchestrationOnline]

Sounds more like an opera than a musical, Diego. I like the piece, but I can't help feeling how nice it would sound with silky, muted strings, allowing the other elements to either blend seamlessly or stand out clearly from the background.

If this is a song, I hear a penetrating, heart-strung soprano coming out of the darkness on a beautiful high note, slowly descending into the texture of the strings.

[SSFMP]

Great harmonics. Add just a TICK (not too much!!) of chorus to your upper & middle strings. These gives it more of a tonal bow striking sound, making it sound more realistic! 5*

[MarryWitch94]

Hi,

Wonderful piece!

How did you made the midi(wich program do you use?)

I'm really curious how the musical will sound like. What's the name of the musical?

[corbin0688]

sounds good man

[mikejoproductions]

oh sorrry lol i couldnt figure it out haha. what program do yo use?