FINALLY NAMED: Thanks to charlieover9000!
So i wrote this song a few days ago, finally got out of the block! It was influenced by a comedy song written by Alex Smith (alexsingssongs), as i think the chord progression, a few rhyming bits and some of the melody it very close to it. But there is no name yet, so i'd love to hear what you think, and what everyone would call it..?
Please rate, comment and enjoy :)
Lyrics:
Verse 1
Well its cold in the morning, when i take a step outside
With the wet grass between my toes, as the people pass on by
I wonder what i want to do, with myself today
well it doesnt even matter to anyone, anyway
Verse 2
Well one day Ill show you all, and make it by myself
but thats not to say that I wont thank you for the help
and its hard to know who trust, on these roads, these days
its why Ive gotta move its why Im not gunna stay
Chorus 1
Im not gunna stay for anything or anyone
at the end of the day when its all said and done
I hope that I look back, and like what I see
and if thats not good enough for you it damn sure is for me
Verse 3
so when you walking down a long road, and you find yourself alone
the one thing that you must not do is turn around, to home
cus one day youll sit up, by yourself on your throne
but until then youve got to bare it as you hold it on your own
Verse 4
you know what people say about doing it all wrong
well if you dont even try, i know youll regret it before along
and you know what people say about moving these days
you now have a choice whether you go or you stay
Chorus 2
If youre not gunna stay for anything or anyone
at the end of the day, when its all said and done
I hope that you look back, and like what you see
and if its not good enough for you well then at least you still have me
Possible Names :
- 'Look Back'
- 'You still got me'
- 'Anyone, Anyway'
- 'In the End'
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Cheers Guys
great work mate!
ToColmusic 2 years ago
cheers
robem10 2 years ago
Great Song!
theboxmodder 2 years ago
cheers!
robem10 2 years ago
Man, you're amazing! 3 years self-tought guitar player? I'm jeallous I'm playing for 10 years and I don't think I can beat your backlights :-)... Really love your play...singing is pretty good too! Keep it up! Cheers from Czech Rep.
(also: On first take? Pretty impressive) :-)
Bugmuster 2 years ago
thanks very much mate :)
robem10 2 years ago