Life Goes On (Original)

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This is an Original Written & Performed By Jeremy Ryan Martin

*Lyrics for those Interested*

Life Goes On

1st VERSE
The door closes, Where will you go now that your lost,
Does this all mean nothing, This test of time,
That goes on & on & on, for so long,
Even after your gone, Ohyour gone,
This life goes on;

2nd VERSE
Red velvet covers those eyes,
That watched it all go down in flames, Oh..Oh..
They watched it burn away,
This mass destruction that caused,
This day to fade away today;

Chorus
Well this Life goes on & on & on.
It goes on..(Repeat)
I guess this life goes on, ..(Repeat)

3rd VERSE
One step closer to the truth,
Oh..what will you do, When you discover,
Its all gone, Its all gone for you,
That door wont open again,
Now that your lost (Repeat lines in 1st verse)

{OUTRO}

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Life Goes On
• Original Music
• Jeremy Ryan Martin
• Acoustic

[jrkraze]

Thanks!

[evan24kiaunah48]

Uhh, dude? YOU ROCK!!

[jrkraze]

Thanks!

[appl044]

Five stars, perfect, in any event!

[jrkraze]

Thanks allot for your comment!

[appl044]

Awesome performance, lyrics and song! Your vocals are great and full of emotion. But..

The vocal/guitar are not paired well, as they are both *above* the range that people want to hear. It will not wear well mixed this way. Somehow, you need to either lower the guitar by an octive (3 capo?) or add significant bass. You play it so fast, I cannot follow what you are singing. 3:33 is nearly perfect, slow it down & cut some verse/chorus.

[jrkraze]

I'm not sure what you mean by Paired Well & the Range people want to hear? I know this is recorded live with the mic from my digital camcorder so I can't really adjust any levels. Before I record I set my levels in my studio room, but the recording from the camcorder mic sounds different especially after I compress the file to upload it. I have to turn my bass down allot because it overloads the mic so that's why there's no low end. Anyway, thanks for the listening & commenting.

[04036330dan21]

Great song!! :) two thumbs up .. Love it dude

[dmio2]

cool tune, nice performance 5*

[jrkraze]

Wow!!  Thanks allot!