Uploader Comments (Proshka)
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evil overthrow
had an evil plan to overthrow
turned your hard labour and made it my own
forged a wound that was never there
crafted a scar to make yours bare
now you'd confess while I'd prepare
wicked sheets to clean your soiled skin in
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built you up a sturdy white crutch
it was just a taste you didn't need much
not so crippled to come back for more
you were the one that couldn't lock the door
i helped you see what was already there
a wicked place with nothing ever fare
in the end I lit a fire under you're corpse
and took your children away on you're black horse.
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welcome back! long time without seeing you good stuff.
This is nice.
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whooooh ! LOL !
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I LOVE the way YOU put it!!
You were talking about Philip DeFranco weren't you? lolol
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so sad..
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good to cya too, its been a while for me for sure!
hope all is well with you...



nice poem
PoeticDevotion1 2 years ago
thanks poetic devotion, stay devoted!!!!!
Proshka 2 years ago
look at me, am i sad too?? examine me, am i sad?
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well you can not see me, i can see you though, you like to show off..
isnt that sad too? showing yourself to whom you can not see? i thinks that's bitter sad.
deliibrahim19 2 years ago
LOL..... well im part of the millions, you included dear!! Muahh
Proshka 2 years ago
Love it :)
hysonly 2 years ago
thanks!
Proshka 2 years ago