haiku elevator.

haiku elevator.

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• haiku
• poetry
• elevator
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[kenrg]

That is great! It works on so many levels (no pun intended).

[blairtoo]

thanks...you've really lifted my spirts (pun intended).

[mistryel]

Clever rascal! that's really funny.

[blairtoo]

this sort of thing is by no means for everybody. i'm glad you liked it.

[blairtoo]

the plane is headed

away.

[Damienf77]

Very nice.

[neondoto]

Oh wow! Expertly crafted, sir.

[rytisg]

well, japanese haiku are 5-7-5 onji sound units, which approximate about 12 english syllables, but this guy thinks english haiku are supposed to be 17 syllables. cute, but you're no refrigerator

[whitefloweret]

I think there was a pun intended. You don't have to hide it.

[OsvaldoPaese]

I like it...i think there is a significance to that number 8 in the middle, a hidden aesthetic beauty to it. It's a continues figure and in a way the brain-thoughts are too. So in turn, this is a poem trying to capture nothing. haha

5 stars my friend...for something that meant showed us nothing. There's beauty to it.

[haroldcampbell]

i don't get it...please help me to see the light-

[PuzzledDragonVideo]

I liked it as mistryel and i still like it....

[lalaluuuh]

what?

[Troublesum1226]

umm Can you explain what it mean? I know that haikus are 5 7 5 right?