Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 9: Revise the Chorus Chords)

Here's my updated Version... simplified chorus (3 chords) added synth, piano, tambourine, claps. changed the vocal melody slightly to fit.

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Music

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• rivers
• cuomo
• is
• awesome
• 80s
• radio
• sawng
• rock

[taylor2d2]

cosmicfog: yes, I had a lot of input on the final version. I recorded a lot of it in my studio and you can hear me singing backup, playing guitar, and synth on the final version. it's pretty cool

[colwightman]

Nice Work! The only knock is that I'd prefer it if it was River's vocal, but the music is brilliant.

[taylor2d2]

i'd prefer rivers' vocal too... we'll see...

[KillBlackRibbon]

Wow, this is awesome. I'm really impressed with how 80's this does feel! Great job man!

[taylor2d2]

thanks! synth = 80s

[TheCosmicFrog]

What's your opinion of the final version on Death to False Metal? Did you have any further input to it?

[JohnL311]

The best part of the song to me is in the first verse "and the airwaves..." backup with echo. To me thats the part of the song with the most depth, but I love trippy echo-y things. That part sends chills up my spine.

[guyvermandarkhero]

pretty good

[LolaG07]

Awesome.

I just became aware of this whole project thing a couple days ago, and have been watching all the video's related to it.. and I really think you did the best of all the people working on it. Gave the biggest push to what the song needed to sound like. A-Freaking-Mazing.

[taylor2d2]

thanks :)

[ju600]

epic

[RoseOnyxis]

Simply smashing. Lol.. Meaning I liked it.

[cajunbetty]

You're badass! Rivers right, you've got talent man. Dont get side tracked.