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THANK YOU ALL MY SUBBERZ,, YOU GUYS RULE!!
Intro
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRRrfsdQwPg
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[[on the bus]]
Nick--I cannot BELIEVE that we couldnt have someone more famous on tour with us.
Joe--I know,, I mean,, Untouched and Unloved? What kind of name is that?
Kevin--I have no idea. I hate this freakin record label.
Mrs Jonas--BOYS! I have heard the band and these girls are EXTREMLEY talented
Nick--GIRLS?
Joe--I thought they were guys
Mr Jonas--What self respecting guy would name his band Untouched and Unloved?
Kevin--True..
Joe--**whispers to Nick** I hope there hott.
Nick--Ditto **knuckle touch,, lmao**
~!~The Girls~!~
**They walk outside and three men are there. They take there bags and the girls get on steps to the bus**
Jamie--Here goes nothing.
**they walk onto the buss**
**Joe Nick and Kevins jaws drop when they see three incrdibly hott girls stepp onto there tour bus**
Mrs. Jonas--Hello girls!
Tess--Hi,, Im Tess
Jamie--Im Jamie
Cassie--Cassie
Mrs. Jonas--Nice to meet you all,, Im Denise Jonas but you can call me Denise
**extend her hand and each girl shakes it with a warm smile**
Kevin--**Whispers**Woah.
Mr. Jonas--Boys,, introduce yourselves.
Nick--Im Nick
Joe--Im Joe.
Kevin--Obviously Kevin.
Nick--But you probalby already knew what our names are.
**Cassie thinks "Well that was cocky,, but maybe he was just joking"**
Cassie--Hey,, Im Cassie,, this is Tess,, and Jamie
Tess--I can say my own name **laughs**
Mrs, Jonas--Well,, Mr, Jonas,, frankie and I are on a separate bus so we'll get out of your way. Your bunks are right behind the boys. Bye.
Everybody--Bye.
**They leave**
Nick--Now the real fun can start **walks up to Cassie and puts his arm around her waist,, pulling her close to him**
Cassie--Woaah,, Back off Jonas,, I Barelly know you **pushes him off**
Kevin--**puts his arms around Tess's waist,, grabbing her ass** How bout you baby,, wanna have some fun?
Tess--Wow,, Akward? **gets out of his grip**
Joe--**starts to go up to Jamie**
Jamie--Dont even think about it pretty boy. Come on girls,, lets go get settled
**they push passed the boys**
Kevin--Damn that Tess has a Nicee ass.
Nick--Psh,, That Cassie is Sexy as hell
Joe--U guys are lucky,, I didnt even get to TOUCH that sexy ass Jamie.
~!~Girls~!~
Jamie--**Pissed** What the Hell was THAT?!**Throws her bag into her bunk**
Tess--Im JUST ass pised as you. that perv grabbed my ass!!
Cassie--And they look so nice everywhere else.
Tess--Why dont we mess with them a little?
Jamie--How?
Tess--We ACT like we like them,, like,, all sexy and flirty,, but we blow them off everytime they try to try somthing. Itll TORTURE them
Cassie--Im IN!
Jamie--Lets do this
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8 comments for chapter 2.
Thanks guys!!
XoJessii
More more more and im SEXY AS HELL :P XP
NickJonasBabe1316 3 years ago
nniiccee cassie xD
JessLovesJB19 3 years ago
p.s. what song is this?
mmgreen23 3 years ago
here i go
tony oller
xD
JessLovesJB19 3 years ago