The setting: a squalid desert motel in the middle of nowhere. One of the oldest stories around--two guys (really bad guys) fighting over a girl. One winner and one loser. Straight forward? Not exactly--there's more to this story. Its up to you to tell it.
MacDiva & The Donnettes are very pleased to present Susannah! The past month of our lives have been spent at This Side Of The Pond Studios, editing this very complicated piece for the OpenCut open source film editing competition. Susannah definitely was a challenge, but Sig, Dinah and I stuck with it to the very end.
It needs work, your shot selection was poor, you sound stunk, and you need to tighten it up. I got very bored very quick.
Rusty2879 2 years ago