The lights came back on and I was on the catwalk at the end. My orange electric guitar was over my shoulder. The crowd was shocked, not knowing I had another song. I smiled when I saw all the huge names watching me.
I was in a pair of black skinny jeans, an orange shirt with black letters that spelled 'Losing My Grip' and a black vest over it. I had an orange high top converse on my left foot, my orange walking boot on the right. My hair was straight, and I looked awesome.
I had beefed up my guitar in this song, and the band and I made up an awesome intro. It was playing now. It transitioned into my song. I had my guitar behind me at the moment.
Are you aware of what you make me feel, baby?
Right now I feel invisible to you, like I'm not real..
Didn't you feel me lock my arms around you?
Why'd you turn away?
Here's what I have to say...
I was left to cry there, waiting outside there
Grinnin' with a lost stare,
That's when I decided...
Why should I care?
'Cause you weren't there when I was scared
I was so alone...
You, you need to listen!
I'm startin' to trip,
I'm losin' my grip
And I'm in this thing alone...
Am I just some chick you placed beside you,
To take somebody's place?
When you turn around can you recognize my face..?
You used to love me, you used to hug me
But that wasn't the case,
Everything wasn't okay..
I was left to cry there
Waiting outside there
Grinnin' with a lost stare,
thats when i decided...
Why should I care?
'Cause you weren't there when I was scared,
I was so alone
You, you need to listen
I'm startin' to trip
I'm losin' my grip
And I'm in this thing alone
Cryin' out loud
I'm cryin' out loud
Cryin' out loud
I'm cryin' out loud
(I swung my guitar around front, and started my solo while singing. The crowd was shocked beyond belief by my playing. It was an awesome solo, I'm not gonna lie. I came up with it with my brothers though.)
Open your eyes
Open up wide
Why should I care
'Cause you weren't there when I was scared,
I was so alone
Why should I care
'Cause you weren't there when I was scared,
I was so alone
Why should I care?
If you don't care, then I don't care
We're not going anywhere
Why should I care?
'Cause you weren't there when I was scared
I was so alone
Why should I care?
If you don't care, then I don't care
We're not goin anywhere
I finished, and the audience rose to their feet. I wasn't expecting the standing ovation. I did all that I could...I said thank you.
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Comment please! Pretty please??????? With Jonas on top???????
Well I could refuse such a cute request?
That was really good I love the way you have written all the adrenelin she can feel as she's playing, I can almost feel like I'm seeing through her eyes looking out into the auidence while she plays.
I've worked out now how you manage to make your stories so real, you describe everything, outfits, locations, emotions. I'm able to build up the picture your trying to create in my mind. Great job.
dizzyduck44 2 years ago
Wow, thanks a lot!
MemphisGal94 2 years ago
i love it. what song is that? great story from a great writer
jonasarchielover 2 years ago
Losing My Grip by Avril Lavigne
MemphisGal94 2 years ago