Word Warrior- "Murderous Lyricist" competition entry

This is my entry to R.A the Rugged Man's murderous lyricist competition. I am representing Wellington, New Zealand. I apologoise for the sound, you might need to turn up your speakers a little. Honest feedback appreciated

ratheruggedman.net

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Murderous
• Lyricist
• R.A
• the
• rugged
• man
• hip
• hop
• wu
• tang
• new
• zealand
• better
• taht
• tyler
• creator

[Millygorilly]

You're the man Gav ;)

[StoneyNJ609]

aite man ima give u a big tip my dude.....rapping is not just about making shit rhyme. Rap stands for rhythm and poetry my dude. gotta make the words be on the flow with the beat.

[rbriceno3]

pretty dope man..

[YeseviL314]

@Gracchi THAT'S WHAT'S UP! U can't call yourself a musician if all you do is listen to something and pick out the bad... a little before the end you can see how he gets comfortable with his words and articulation and starts to develop a sense of real style. I don't know him, but for someone who is just starting out, i think he's getting pretty nice! @brew7272.. you're the person music can do without the non-supportive, ignorant i think i'm gods gift to music but don't know shit

[musickaltherapy]

THE ONLY DOPE PART ABOUT YOU IS YOU BUMP RA THE RUGGED MAN AND YOU ENTERED TWICE THATS SHOULD DISQUALIFY YOU NOT LIKE YELL WIN N E WAYS HILL TOP HOOD WANNA B

[sijenkinson1]

canny man your good just need to swallow your spit haha but seriously i ilike the lyrics man keep it up

[justkevin09]

nice dude lots of potential, dig the tongue twister rhymes. i gotta say what i say to everyone though work on your flow. good luck dude

[carla87ization]

aye man is the compition still happening? i wanna do it but dont know dudes channel?hit me up wit info plz!!!

[devilryuNZ1]

@devilryuNZ1 and by looking how fast it took you to reply, thats sure as hell looks like what you are doing. So tell me... Whos the dorky dumb dipshit now? I'm not even going to waste my time with you anymore. In fact, Youtube just marks your shit as spam..... even an online service system doesn't give a fuck about you.

I'm done.....

[devilryuNZ1]

@devilryuNZ1 I entered this contest as a fan of R.A, and so people who like my shit can let me know. And im going to keep doing this for those who appreciate it... not for whiney ass, internet tough guys like yourself. You know why i even replied to your shit today? To destroy you and to expose you. I wanted to see how long it would take for you to reply, and guess what? It took under an hour. I bet ur sitting at ur comp waiting for people to mention your attention hungry ass