Life Ain't Nothing But a Dream - Felondefearz (until we rich cover)

Felondefearz first song, Life Ain't Nothing But a Dream.
Constructive critiscm appreciated, i'm still working on my style, lyrics and ways of rapping. More songs and freestyles to come out soon! Please Subscribe!
Let me know what you think or what i could do better.

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[Felondefearz]

thanks for all the critism guys, i'm taking it all on board with my next song which should be up within the week. I really appreciate what your all saying!

thanks a lot guys

[XjhonnieX]

i downloaded ur song

[Felondefearz]

@XjhonnieX thanks man, ill do my best to get more up !

[LNGshotgaming]

really cool song dude, i hope you get noticed! and yes, we do need real rap back

[Felondefearz]

@LNGshotgaming thanks buddy, i'll be bringing more out soon! i'll do my best man

[ThaLegacyLover]

1 person doesn't know what the definition of rap is...

[102astig]

DAMN THIS IS NICE keep it up

[DisguisedKings]

@BrownJeyneZ

[Maximason]

fucking epic!

[BrownJeyneZ]

The 2 Dislikes are Sweeeeeny using 2 accounts.

[mrgummiebear100]

this is the best song ever i cant beleiv that you rote it i love it .it is the best song ever

[proGaimz]

Sounds good but really work on your flow. It's not TOO bad, but not good either I've heard worse. You should take inspiration from Lowkey 'cause of your accent and it'll sound awesome!

[roemerful]

I like it..but you need to speak louder.

[ms1camm]

for a 1st song its really good ... but im not sure all th words kinda flow easily ... its a bit slow and it doesnt quite sound like a 'rap' like for example ... pro green etc... but for a 1st song its really good but maybe speed it up a bit and try speak from your heart :) keep it up and you will hopefully get somewhere big :) Good Luck :) xx