Amateur Manga: "Elite Sight"

READ HERE PLEASE!
I have just started on this manga and I barely work on it though. ALL of the art is not penciled or contemplated, this is all improvisation on what the plot is so far. The art is made by hand and is simple pen art so it is not all perfect, keep in mind.
I wanted Mark Crilley to See this because I have seen how far he has gone with his style of manga. Now he didn't exactly inspire to do this but I just want him to see it :) 'Sup Mark

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[LOLGIRLZ123451]

19 is an adult not boy good job

[JShamw0w]

@LOLGIRLZ123451 Lmao big deal. He's a male right?

[JShamw0w]

@xLuciferProductionsx I know I realize that the beginning diary entries were quite cheesy or tacky. I have become a much better writer since then. Thank you for your critisism.

[NSZ951LIZS]

whitch pencil do yu use? please answer quik!!!!

thanks

[JShamw0w]

@NSZ951LIZS Actually this is a pen. I believe I made it with one of those Pilot g pens that you can find anywhere

[sianthaibright]

nice comic you should check out mine too. I hoped you continued the story lol. I think you should make his dairy seem I don't know less, 'I like guns I don't know why' I'm not trying to be rude I have no intention of being rude but, his dairy entry seems kind of strange in a way. Anyway, subbed I hope you don't take this comment the wrong idea. Nice concept though.

[JShamw0w]

@sianthaibright I agree with what your saying but I stopped making this and drawing period. A long time ago because It got boring. But I draw still only when people ask me to make something for them

[PaperGTutorials]

your good a drawing

[ventusbakuganuser]

i like you book so far ^.^ please do more

[SHUSHIKID]

HITMAN REBORN -_- GASP

[lilrey1014]

Hey cool comic when u finish it can u put it on YouTube

[acex320]

WHOA you sound kind of like ash ketchum HA HA HA!!!!

[xLuciferProductionsx]

Hey bro. I really like your idea, but I must critique your writing style. It seems you're trying to hard to get your point across. Make your chracter seem more relaxed. Not 'I'm a teenager and we like violence'. Keep working on it though.

[lostsouloffps]

dude that's epic! i would actually spend money to buy that! it looks awesome and inspiring! now im making my own comics

BTW i thumbs upped and i may subscribe if you make more :)