Before Crisis Elfe Scene for a friend
Uploader Comments (Aussieroth7)
All Comments (16)
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This is such a cute dub! Amazing job, look forward to seeing future work :)
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Excellent for a first attempt!! I know I wasn't nearly as good when I started! Awesome!!
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Sephiroth - Aussieroth: Hmm.. What can I say about three lines? I thought they were all done well. But if I may personally say something about how you portrayed him with that first line, he sounded like the evil Sephiroth after he finds out he's a spawn of Jenova, he was relatively normal around this time so I don't think it was necassary to sound so intimidating.
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And oddly enough the line "She's their Leader" sounded like you put WAY too much emphasis on the surprise factor. Yes she would be surprised but not up to the point where she sounds bewildered beyond her comprehension of reality. Try to keep it somewhere in the middle. I liked your battle grunts too! Sounded natural to me! ^^
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Alida - XBlackTaintedHeartX: Nicely done Karla, I'll admit it was hard for me to properly critique you with all that hysterical emotion but when I actually thought about it it all sounded very much natural, but being the nitpicky bastard that I am I have to point out at least one flaw. ;) The line "This doesn't look good" felt too underwhelming. She thinks she's about to die so I don't think one would sound so calm in that situation.
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Elfé - Yyani Rose: You portrayed the character well. The emotion in my opinion was well done and the I have no complaints about the battle grunts. My one minor complaint is that I felt more emotion could have been put more in the lines "Prepare yourself Shinra lackey!" and "Resign yourself to your Fate." Remember her comrades were slaughtered so she should still feel some anger toward Shinra. All in all not bad for your first VA session, keep practicing! ^^
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i love the tonality (i think that's the right verb-ige) of her voice. Vedy niicccee!
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This was a pretty good dub. I really liked the fight scene between Elfie and Shotgun, and I thought it was particularly well done :)
this was an absolute treat. :) Yyani has such an interesting voice. i mean this in the best way possible, I think her voice is great. i honestly do wanna hear more of her. so please do more! does she have an account?
christiansekhanan 1 month ago
@christiansekhanan No.... Not yet ;). I'll also be uploading a redux of this scene soon.
Aussieroth7 1 month ago
@RhapsodyDusk Pretty good for a first attempt though, eh?
Aussieroth7 1 month ago
@darkserventofheaven Yeah.... they really should.
Aussieroth7 1 month ago