The FanFiction Critic, episode 24, "Oops-A-Daisy," part 4
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@ztslovebird or maybe they went swimming in the lake...with the giant squid watching them make out under the water...ew.
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Maybe they went swimming in Hogwarts' hidden swimming pool.
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OK, you had me laughing so hard I cried at 9:19 onward! What a um, crappy, story this is!
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Oh my God, swimming in March in Scotland?! In a BAKINI?? I'm cringing just at the thought!
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Hogwarts is in Scotland, which only makes it worse. I have been swimming in a loch in March. Not far from Glen Finnan, in fact, where that iconic bridge in the films is.
It was not for fun. You will hurt. It's too cold.
Also, we don't really have "baby showers" here in the UK. We just hand over presents when we come to visit. Just another thing that makes this story... Even more ridiculous.
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Lucius didn't "make" Draco become a Death Eater. Lucius... wait, how was he even there in the first place? Lucius was sent to prison after book 5. If anything, Lucius WOULDN'T want Draco to become a Death Eater. That's the whole point. The only reason Voldemort gave Draco that mission was to punish Lucius, because Voldemort was certain Draco would die in the attempt. Ah well, if I try to point out every canon raping bit of this drivel I'll be here all night.
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Wait. Did this story just switch perspectives mid conversation?
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@mitzirocker I thought it was in England.
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uh how long were they making out that they ahd to gasp for air ???
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"His tongue entered her mouth and he tasted me."
What?
triplequeen 1 year ago 16
"..with a towel around his waste"
Rofl :D .. Like that whole section wasn't crappy enough. (badumTSCHHH)
Annausagi2 1 year ago 15