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In The year 1809

My name is Alexis, meaning Defender, my father is a great wizard, i do not know my mother she died at childbirth, my older brother Andrew blames me. My father, says i was given my name as i would need to defend my family in times of need, but i not quite sure if he ment my family now. Andrew has inherited my fathers powers and i have nothing but one power of time travel, i am tempted to go back and save my mother but then i will disapear.

"Alexis?" i heard my fathers voice it was never angry or troubled. "Willow is here" Willow, my best friend and my most trusted conrade, her power of healing named her. I watched Willow walk into my bed chamber. "Willow" i said overjoyed to see her again i hugged her tightly. Then it came a loud crash of thunder, huge flashes of lightning, i kept hold of Willow's hand wishin git to be over. Then the Lightning his the castle, it was going to crush us,the castle was falling down, then it went black.

A two hundred years later, 2009

My name is Joe, i'm 17 and i have to go on a stupid history field trip, to see a castle that was struck by lightning two hundred years ago. "the main structure is still standing but, the three main bedrooms were destoryed, acording to sources only 4 people died, a maid, a 17 year old boy, a Servant and a middle aged man. But there is a mystery into where two young ladies, at the age of 15, disapeared to as they were in the the bedroom that had the most damage. Mr Jonas!?"i was just staring out the window of the bus "Joe!" i snaped out of it "were you listening to i word i just said?"
"no sir" i replyed
"listen, when i am speaking or your parents will be getting another call"
"sorry Sir" i saided as we all piled out of the stuffy bus, i remebered what Mr Matthews had just said about that boy who died at 17 my age, and the two girls who went missing they were the same age as my sister and brother, Selena and Nick. In a away i felt sorry for them, it's just being here it's like those 4 poeple who died need where the two girls went, i've got to find out, great i sound crazy. As i trailed behind my classmates i noticed a painting in a glass cabinate. The Picture had a middle aged man with his arms round a boy who looked about 17 and girl about 15, the girl was beyond beautiful, her pale white skin, deep blue eyes, long flowing brown hair, then it came to me that this was one of the girls who went missing, i took a second look at the Boy, he was muscular, pale skinned but he had his fathers face if that was who the other man in the was, i was about to walk off when i noticed in the top left hand corner, was just the face of a beautiful blound lady with the same face as the young girl, i guessed she was the mother but must have died many years before the others as her face didn't look as aged as the mans. A wave of sadness hit me that these people may have been wealthey but they were extremly unlucky.

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[JonasHouse09]

Oh interesting.

Usually I have a ton of advice for fellow writers (My story is Murdered, a Jonas Brothers Scream Story)

All I have to say to you, I don't know if you will take it because you wrote this a year ago), is capitalize the first word in quotation marks, and the word "I."

You're an amazing writer, I hope you finished this...

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 thats cool:)

[octoberopal1]

@KissMeNickJerryJonas well she is a great anime drawer and is really wierd to tell you the truth like one time she wore a japanesse dress to skool and didnt care wat anyone said :]

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 she is awesome! everyone in the school loves her, but she likes me the best. whats your willow like?

[octoberopal1]

@KissMeNickJerryJonas OMG!! no way thats cool

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 me too!

[octoberopal1]

i have a bestie named willow cool =] ♥ ur story

[MileyIsNotUgly]

This is really awesome! It's very original! :)

[purpleroxs]

love it!