Touched by Angel [AF100]

Sometimes keeping your hands to yourself isn't the right answer.

Category:

Comedy

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[twelvestreets]

Most of the shots don't cut together and the lighting is awful. Great camera, terrible crew.

[XionXTX]

@twelvestreets I would count this as constructive criticism if you had even one video uploaded showing how your opinion is relevant.

[2RandomStudios]

Nice job, but the intro zoom effect (taken straight from video copilot) could have been improved by using Google Maps images specifically for your location, then using a motion blur effect combined with a camera crane (If possible) to make it look like one continuous zoom straight to your house.

[XionXTX]

@2RandomStudios Yeah it was just for a class and I didn't put too much effort into it, haha. I actually have a version where it goes to Phoenix (where we filmed it) and kind of fades into it, but I haven't uploaded it. Figured the story's more important than the intro.

Although I really do like my Beard Clan logo, hahaha

[wrightfilms]

Foul language aside, this is brilliant. Keep telling your stories, by any means necessary. Peace

[XionXTX]

@wrightfilms Hey man, thanks a lot :)

[twelvestreets]

@mikeg91763 Lol, now I'm illiterate as well? And yet it's you who can't spell, who can't construct simple sentences! Look at the cut at 1:20 - 1:21 - it just doesn't work. Now, if you seemingly tiny mind cannot comprehend this fact then further debate is futile.

[mikeg91763]

@twelvestreets first. its not mine to sell i just saw it on youtube like you did. and second im not talking about the short, Im talking about you. thats what i mean by you don't get it you missed the whole point. i hope your not like this when your not anonymouse. if so , don't eat or drink anything that you don't serve yourself and can be spat in... about the short... the lighting isnt "flat" go read a book you illiterate son of bitch in particular cinematoghraphy practice and theory page 111

[twelvestreets]

@mikeg91763 lol, say whatever you like, but the piece is poorly edited and does not work. Try selling this junk and see what happens, dickwad ;)

[mikeg91763]

@twelvestreets what laptop "scene" you idiot. the whole thing was one scene. your opinion while relevant. Is less of an opinion and more like you trying desperately to let anyone whole read your post know that you know words like "Coverage" and "forced editing". and one thing I know about Professionals is that they don't go on youtube telling people that they're professional. You really don't get it. you just don't. your sad

[twelvestreets]

@XionXTX My opinion is relevant because I have had several films successfully distributed - why the hell would I have them on youtube? The lighting is flat, that's simply a fact. The editing also feels forced because of poor/inappropriate coverage - the laptop scene in particular.

[2RandomStudios]

@XionXTX lol well I'm glad to see you have already tried my suggestion xD