Very First Monologue

This is a monologue from the award-winning film Patch Adams. It discusses a very interesting point of view. This is my first monologue so any feedback is more then appreciated, thanks!

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• proscout
• film
• movie
• gag
• actor
• laugh
• funny
• drama
• dramatic
• crazy
• beginner
• monologue
• patch
• adams
• take
• compete
• video

[Freshhh8]

That was really good! I was really convinced. Haha i liked how it ended. Good job! :)

[scratch3z]

THanks! lol the ending is just me naturally, it slipped out.

[makailagarrett]

pretty good

[scratch3z]

thanks ^_^

[wldeaglesyes]

Okay.. Yeah that was pretty good.. But you kinda tried a lil too hard to act like Robin Williams i think. It was good. But how would you do this if it were YOUR part and hasn't been filmed yet.? Aside from that. Awesome.

[scratch3z]

You make a great point. I did watch the 7th Day video on youtube before i did this one, I wanted to do something original, and it was my first monologue so maybe with my next one I'll make it moreso "my" part as if it wasn't filmed yet, Thanks alot for the feedback!

[wldeaglesyes]

WHERE is it?

i dont see it?

[RenaSweet]

Hey :)

okay i love that fact you have emotion and even behind all that you can feel something greater.

awsome job keep going!

ull make it big!

[drzdudette]

that monologue was really convincing.

but you probably shouldn't have cursed at the end because people remember the ending of everything the most, and saying "would be fucking awesome" just took away from your performance which was really good by the way.

[ashkids09]

that was great! I really felt it, it would be good for you to practice making yourself cry, because a lone tear dripping off your cheek would really make it that much better!

[ashkids09]

That was really great! Very emotional, very powerful..I thought you were really going to cry! Good luck!