Rated R
Joe's POV......................
We walked into our hotel room and I got really nervous. I don't even know why. I mean we've done stuff in my room when my family was home. We've done stuff alone in her house and we've even done stuff in public so why in the world am I nervous about a hotel room. Maybe because there is something we needed to talk about.
Kris : Wow, this room is gorgeous *looking around the room*
Joe: No, your gorgeous
Kris: Your so sweet. You always know what to say.
Joe: *under his breath* I hope that's the case tonight.
We got comfortable in our underwear and sat by the big fireplace they had in the room. I started it up because it got a little chilly, or maybe it was my excuse to stall.
Kris: Are you ok Joe, you've been quite longer than normal.
Joe: Yeah, I have a lot to say and I don't know how to say it.
Kris: Ok, you're scaring me. What's going on?
Joe: well here goes nothing. I'm going to tell you what's on my mind But for now I don't want an answer from you I want you to think about what I'm saying and then when your ready we'll talk about this again.....ok
Kris: OK, but your still acting weird.
Joe: *starting to pace* I want you to know a few things before I go into it. I think your the most beautiful girl I have ever met. You've made me feel things I've never felt before. We've done things I would have never imagined with someone else. We've been together for over a year now and I more happier now than the day you agreed to go out with me. What I'm trying to say is...*stops pacing, takes something out of his pants pocket and gets down on one knee* I love you with all my heart and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Will.......you.....marry...me
She had this look on her face as I was putting the ring on her finger and she went to speak but I reminded her that I didn't want an answer until she was ready. Then she put her arms around me and kissed me. When her lips touched mine it made me light headed because I just realized that I totally just went through all that without stopping. I wasn't sure I was gonna make it but all my thought just started to pour out of me. My thoughts ended when her lips left mine and she started to take off the rest of what she was wearing. Her body was amazing in the light that the fire was making. I took off the rest of what I was wearing and we stepped closer to each other. I wanted to touch her everywhere and all at once but savor the moment at the same time, I don't know how I'm gonna do that right now. She kissed my shoulder and worked her way up to my neck. She bit down into my neck but gently. Then she licked my earlobe.
Kris: *whispering into my ear* Take me now, please.
Joe: Before we start I have one more request.
Kris: anything
Joe: I want to make love to you by the fireplace.
We walked over to the bed and dragged all of the bedspread to the floor and got as close as we could to the fire. I layed her down and just looked at her for a second. I began to touch her starting at her face. I ran my hand down the side of her cheek then down her neck. I came across her breast and stopped for a minute. I circled her nipple with my thumb for a while until I heard her breath come in short pants. I started to work my way down her side and down her leg and I came back up the other leg and all the way back up to her face. I kissed her lips and then she stood up. She was standing right over me when I caught her scent. I closed my eyes and I grabbed her hips and brought her to my face. I took my fingers and then spread the folds between her legs apart. I licked and sucked on her there until she couldn't stand anymore. I brought her down and placed her on top of me and I entered her, but not all the way. I put the tip in and pulled out and then a little more and pulled out again until she couldn't take it anymore. She lost control and started riding me hard until I lost everything that I had built up up to that moment. We came together like nothing that ever happened before. We fell the rest of the way to the floor, I covered her up and whispered in her ear how much I loved her. She did the same and we drifted off to sleep.
When Joe said he wanted to do it near the fire place, i started laughing.
I kept picturing them about to did until her hair caught on fire.
Im sorry, i kill the story and the moment.
Carry on with the write (:
hollybadollie 3 years ago 5