Just One Wish- acoustic original song

Please comment. Here's an acoustic original that I wrote. My friend wrote the second verse.I've only been playing guitar for three months so its simple. This was my first performance and I was really nervous. I performed it for a church senior recog. dinner and dance

chords: G, Cadd9, C, D
I'm sitting here with you
Underneath the starry sky
As the moonlight shines on your face
I cant heip but smile

Bridge
I've been waiting for soo long
To say x3

Chorus
That I love you
And theres nothing been more true
I have just one wish
That is if you'd wait for me
And I could just hold you
This, the last night

G,Cadd9,D x2

The stars light up your eyes
I cant believe that this is still
Such a surprise
We've known for awhile that this
Would be our final goodbye
No matter how far we move apart
You know you'll always have my heart

Bridge

Chorus

I remember the times we spent together
I remember the tears we cried together
I remember the laughs we shared together

Chorus

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[RockinVideosRSweet]

nice tune, was this in a cafe?

[joshjmusic]

no it was at a dance in gym. thanks for the comment

[mousepadguy]

Great lyrics. It's real. Not something made up for just "good" lyrics, Good job! Keep it up!

[nyalih]

Sweet Josh! Its catchy, i'm gonna have it stuck in my head. you seem really confident, i would never guess you were nervous. Way to go!