Switzerland APH Audition (VAA Lines)

Any critiques or suggestions would be AWESOME.
First time recorder here, so I'm totally cool with any input.
Also, promise to get better programs/equipment if I'm picked (though some suggestions on what good recording programs/equipment are would also be great ^^;)

Thanks for listening!

Extra lines: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pWYf1Q8mes&fmt=18
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Nation's name: Schweizerische Eidgenossenschaft (this is German for The Swiss Confederation)
Capital: Berne
Languages: German, French, Italian, Romansh, etc.
Birthday: August 1st
National flower: Endelweiss

Human name: Vash Zwingli
Height: Unknown
Age: 18

An eternally neutral nation that lives seemingly as a social hermit/recluse, surrounded by the grand Alps.
Even though Switzerland has an image of being peaceful, he is the biggest producer of guns in the world, has the biggest military strength and holds the world's wallet. With this, he is able to be the eternal neutral nation because other nations are unable to really lay a hand on him.
Was originally born as a nation from strong unions/treaties, but because he doesn't have many relations with other nations, he hates outsiders (foreigners).
He will work hard on a job until the very last detail is finished.
He also has a past achievement of being hired by the Vatican as a mercenary.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Switzerland
• APH
• Fandub

[lepetitevoix]

T-the yodeling-

AWESOME.

The way you quickly said 'Not the price' was good~.

Wait, I thought Switz was supposed to be a little monotone.

In any case, good luck!

[arisadelle]

Thanks, I spent a lot of time finding the right way to say that. I appreciate the support!

[TheDicloniusninja]

awesome! :D

[SightlessandHopeless]

AMAZING.

[funjojo678]

SO CUTE.

DO WANT.

/crais

[ccppfan]

OMG YODELLING 8D

I didn't see that coming. That was awesome! ^^

[15thburningfiddle]

Is this for the actual Funi dub? 0_0

[batmitzva]

hi! can you audition for my APH fandub?

[psycat4ever]

I love your Switzerland!!!!! Fantastic!

[nana5h1]

sry for the late critique! anyway...

I think Switzerland needs to be more "emotional" (he seemed kind of monotone in this).