The Family Man - A2 Moving Image Arts Coursework Piece - Havering Sixth Form College

My Moving Image Arts A2 coursework piece.

Thanks to Amy Emanuel and Luke Emanuel for acting in the piece and a huge thanks to Kevin MacLeod (www.incompetech.com) for the amazing - royalty free - music!

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• moving
• image
• arts
• a2
• coursework
• the
• family
• man
• havering
• sixth
• form
• college

[Thesurus05]

I think it's a lot better than some of the amateurish and lackadaisical attempts by other Media and Film students. You clearly strived to produce this and your endeavours are required for a career in the field of Film Production. Good effort. :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@Thesurus05 Thanks for the kind words, means a lot! :)

[Thesurus05]

@TotallyAwesomeSkits No problem. But I would take some suggestions into account if you want to achieve top marks. :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@Thesurus05 Will be ;) This was a first draft, got some pickups over the week and just need to re edit it together. Should re-upload the final piece in January :-)

[mjelf15]

What a pile of shit...

[PieHoleRepublic]

@TheHighTechCompany What a fucking nob head.

[Hanzibarrrrr]

omg, that guy is mean!

do they understand this is just coursework? lmao!

i think its good dw :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@TheHighTechCompany The work will be colour graded when I re-edit after the holidays, definately wanted to sort out colour correction as I didn't do it on my first draft as you've seen. You say the muzzle flash is too small, yet when it is bigger it looks worse, so that is why I opted for smaller in the end :) Thanks for your suggestions, will be making sure I take them into account when I re-edit after Christmas!

[TheHighTechCompany]

@TotallyAwesomeSkits Yes i do, colour grade your work, it will be far more professional. second if possible add a 2:35:1 anamorphic crop ratio, this is what most current movies work with. Now for your effects the blood splatter was just plain awful, I suggest finding another blood splatter and make sure timing is correct, the muzzle flash is too small and looks fake, add a Gaussian blur and increase brightness on one of the gunshot layer. you could also try a vignette to increase tension.

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@TheHighTechCompany Sorry to hear you thought it was so crap. Any areas you could specify on? Going to be re-doing some scenes next week, so Constructive Criticism is useful :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@mjelf15 Like your comment ;) Constructive Criticism is welcome, as I can actually improve from that.