While She Sleeps - Crows Vocal Cover (First ever attempt)

My first ever attempt at a vocal cover and it was the first try too.
I know im shit but im still learning haha
Be honest tell me what you think
if you dont like it tell me how to improve :)
thankyou

Category:

Music

Tags:

• While she sleeps
• Screamo
• Cover
• Music
• Funny
• Rome
• Grave
• hand
• give
• hello
• food
• whatever
• random
• shit
• rubbish
• fail

[UreWorstN1ghtM4are]

honestly if you are going to cover something then you should try and do it specifically personally I don't think there's anything wrong with your vocal style just for while she sleeps its more of just exhaling a shout instead of trying to hit highs with a midtone voice which is what it sounds like but yeah if you do another cover of a sleeps song its just a shout really bud, but it was a nice interpretative version of crows.

[CeramicCheese]

@UreWorstN1ghtM4are I have to thankyou best critism I'v had to be fair you're honest I like it haha, This was my first cover back what last month, Havnt ever really done screaming before or really tried too but im honestly trying now... I'm uploading a redo of this cover right now, Hopefully you approve more and give me some honest feedback on it? :)

[ctfcjake]

faggot



[CeramicCheese]

@ctfcjake Thank you for such constructive criticism haha

[KokoroAmuto]

Sounds awsome for our first attempt :3

[CeramicCheese]

@KokoroAmuto thankyouu :)

[Wilderbeast789]

I think I just shit myself

[theharvester97]

better than mine :D

[zanderkuh]

its pretty good (y)

[UreWorstN1ghtM4are]

@CeramicCheese No problem just you develop your own vocal style over time or you just learn from going to see bands etc and all that shit but yeah ill comment, and no worries about the constructive criticism everyone needs it, its just a learning curve

[YourMedusaInMyEyes]

Pretty good for your first time doing this. All I would recommended is working on the technique, like try to do Miss May I's scream (forgive&forget) just so you can get your range better. Take a look back at mine if you want.

[iSCREAM1990]

i like it man

[electricpyrotechnic]

:D that was awesome!